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HaikuWriMo 2009

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An Itty-Bitty Contest

Journal Entry: Wed Nov 18, 2009, 3:44 PM



Hi Everyone!

So I only have my nifty, critique-allowing, anonymously donated subscription for a two and a half more weeks, so on a (procrastinatory) whim, I decided to run a little contest. And I do mean little.

:bulletgreen: Contest Run Time: Wednesday, November 18th to Wednesday, November 25. You have until midnight on the 25th to submit your entries!

:bulletgreen: What to submit: Poetry! Specifically poetry that

:bulletred: Has strong imagery

:bulletred: Contains at least one example of allusion (definition found here: [link]) (It would help me greatly if you clarify this in your artists' comments, just so I know where the reference is :))

:bulletred: Uses some form of sound technique - alliteration, euphony, cacaphony etc. I'm not terribly picky. Just so long as I can tell that you're playing with sounds at some point!

:bulletgreen: Restrictions: Feel free to submit any poem you want, new or old. You may only submit once, however. Also, please nothing longer than 100ish lines. (I won't give you a solid line-limit, just nothing too terribly long :))

:bulletgreen: How to submit: Note me with a link to your poem and a subject that reads "Contest Entry" or something like that.

:bulletgreen: Prizes: Sadly, I'm not rich enough to give out subscriptions. I have lots of critiques in me, though! Thus:

:bulletred: First prize will recieve three critiques (either in the little critiquing engine (if I still have it) or just in the comment box from me on poetry of their choice, plus a journal feature from me for your outstanding contest entry, and also a little blurb from me about how awesome you are :)

:bulletred: Second prize will recieve two critiques, a feature and a blurb

:bulletred: Third prize will recieve one critique, a feature and a blurb.

:bulletgreen: Judges: Because I came up with this contest on a whim, so far I'm its only judge. I would be super-psyched if someone else wanted to help me and/or donate prizes, though! It's very small, since it only runs for a week, but I'm hoping to have at least five entries :)

So that's all for now, everyone. Happy writing!

~ aillesdors

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  • Mood: Eager
  • Listening to: Nothing :(
  • Reading: Maus - Art Spiegelman/The Awaking - Kate Chopin
  • Watching: Nothing
  • Playing: Nothing
  • Eating: Nothing ;(
  • Drinking: Not tea. How sad!

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Devious Info

  • Current Residence: Mansfield
  • Interests: poetry, literature, singing, dreaming
  • Favourite movie: Les Choristes
  • Favourite band or musician: Jars of Clay, Josh Groban, Metamora...
  • Favourite genre of music: Celtic, Folk, Classical, Choral
  • Favourite artist: Renoir, van Gogh
  • Favourite poet or writer: Poet: T.S. Eliot Author: Hawthorne
  • MP3 player of choice: iPod
  • Shell of choice: None
  • Favourite game: Cribbage or Settlers of Catan
  • Favourite gaming platform: A board, or possibly a deck of cards
  • Favourite cartoon character: Cheetara - Thundercats
  • Personal Quote: Poetry is the music of the soul
  • Tools of the Trade: A pencil and a notebook

When you read a poem, which poetic technique do you value the most? 

41%
17 deviants said Imagery - I have to see it to feel it
22%
9 deviants said Metaphor - I love interesting comparisons that make me think about the subject
15%
6 deviants said Other (please comment!)
7%
3 deviants said Clarity - I hate esoteric nonsense! Get straight to the point or shut up!
7%
3 deviants said Reliability - if I can relate to the poem's themes, I'll love the work
2%
1 deviant said Sound techniques (alliteration, euphony, assonance etc.) - a poem's beauty is in the way it sounds!
2%
1 deviant said Allusion - It's so much fun to trace an author's work back to several different sources!
2%
1 deviant said Proper spelling and grammar - If it doesn't have those, there's no point in reading it

Comments


:iconkomitadjie:
Hey, thanks for the favourite on my Verla photos, Aillesdors! :D She's such a fun cat to photograph, she's very happy to sit there and look adorable. :)

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"Sometimes you have fun, and sometimes the fun has you." -- Sergeant Schlock
:iconaillesdors:
No problem! How couldn't I favorite them? She's adorable, and you capture her so beautifully!

--
"Oh let me think it is not quite in vain
To sigh out sonnets to the midnight air"

~ Keats, "To Hope"
:iconkomitadjie:
Heheh, a lot more of THAT is her just being highly photogenic. You can't really take pictures of cats, they have to GIVE them to you. :) She's really an adorable little girl, she's still rather kitten-ish, only a tad over a year old. :)

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"Sometimes you have fun, and sometimes the fun has you." -- Sergeant Schlock
:iconaillesdors:
But that's perfect! A little kittenish - so still cute - but mature enough to have that awesome refinement of a queen-kitty is just perfect!

--
"Oh let me think it is not quite in vain
To sigh out sonnets to the midnight air"

~ Keats, "To Hope"
:iconkomitadjie:
True, true. :) I'm just happy that she likes being photographed. XD Makes it a lot easier to get neat photos.

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"Sometimes you have fun, and sometimes the fun has you." -- Sergeant Schlock
:iconbeyondtheobvious2012:
if you have the time...would you mind critiquing one of mine plz? (:
only if u want to...

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"A writer is someone who has taught his mind to misbehave." -Oscar Wilde
:iconaillesdors:
Sure! Do you have a particular one in mind?

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"Oh let me think it is not quite in vain
To sigh out sonnets to the midnight air"

~ Keats, "To Hope"
:iconbeyondtheobvious2012:
how bout either "Flight by Night, Night by Night" or "My Heavy Heart"....your choice (:
or browse through my gallery and choose any one u want

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"A writer is someone who has taught his mind to misbehave." -Oscar Wilde
:iconlovehealsyou725:
I know I haven't yet properly replied to your critique as yet. It is nothing against you or the critique though. I have actually deleted all of my deviations for now. Just read my latest journal entry-you'd know what I am talking about. =]

But I promise I will reply to your critique properly, and I will fix the things in the poem that you asked, I will do it when I have the mind to do it. :) And yes, even though I did delete all the deviations, I have not lost your wonderful critique-I have saved it on my computer.

Just thought I'd let you know. :hug:

--
The woods are lovely, dark and deep
But I have promises to keep
And miles to go before I sleep...
And miles to go before I sleep
-Robert Frost

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